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JASPER THE FRIENDLY GHOST

Post by Bluedizboy on Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:44 pm

Guess what! I'm trying my hand at fanfic writing. I didn't get far before I got bored, but I decided to post what I have. If anyone likes it, spam my inbox with "WRITE JTFG! WRITE JTFG, YOU FOOL!" to remind me. XD Everyone knows I get distracted eas - OOH A FLY! And BTW, I'm in favor of the Keane-Adopts-RRB thing.


Narrator: The City of Townsville! [review add line relating to story]
[Keane household]
[The Boys are watching a scary movie on the couch.]
TV Woman: The ghosts are coming! AAAAAH!
TV Man: NO! They got her! And her ghost is joining them! No, Jill, DON'T JOIN THEM!
TV Jill's Ghost: Must... kill... Tim...
TV Man[Tim]: NO! I loved her so much! AAAAH! JILL, NO!
Boomer: [sniff] HE LOVED HER SO MUCH!
Butch: [rolls eyes] It's just a movie, Boomer... baby...
Boomer: I AM NOT A BABY!
Brick: Can we watch one movie WITHOUT THE TWO OF YOU FIGHTING?!
Butch: WHY DONT YOU NOSE YOUR WAY OUT OF MY BUSINESS?!
Brick: MAYBE YOU SHOULD THINK ABOUT WHAT SAY!
Boomer: CAN YOU TWO SHUT UP!? The movie's back on!
Brick & Butch: SHUT UP!
Ms Keane: [walks in living room] BOYS! It's getting way too loud in here!
Boomer: Butch started it.
Butch: [rolls eyes and folds arms] How come I'm the one that always gets all the blame?
Brick: Because you usually deserve it.
Ms Keane: BOYS! [walks to them and turns TV off] It's your bedtime anyway. I'll be up in a moment.
[the boys sadly float up to bed]
[the boys are getting dressed for bed]
Butch: This is all your fault, Boomer! If you wouldn't have cried like a little girl, Mom would have never came in and
turned the TV off!
Brick: Technically, Butch, if you would have learned to control your anger and love for teasing -
Butch: Oh shut it, Mullet Boy.
Brick: MULLET BOY!? WHY I OUGHTA -
[Brick rushes Butch and tries to strangle him. Butch yanks Brick's hair in response.]
Boomer: GUYS!
[The fighting boys freeze and stare at Boomer.]
[Ms Keane enters the boys' bedroom.]
Ms Keane: Alright, boys, time for bed.
[Brick and Butch release each other, defeated.]
[The three boys take their appropriate places in bed. Ms Keane pulls the blanket over them.]
Ms Keane: Goodnight, boys. See you in the morning. [turns out the light and leaves the room.]
[three hours later. It's the middle of the night. Boomer is awake.]
Boomer: [blinks]


As you can tell, it's going to involve a ghost. I don't know if you'd call it a spoof of Casper, considering I've never seen that movie, but yeah. XD
I tried to more closely define the Boys' personallities, such as Brick attempting to be the leader and yet causing fights. Boomer the sensitive one, but he has more of a rough edge than Bubbles. And Butch[haven't really gotten to a point to put his hyperness into play] sorta like Buttercup with Bubbles, the bully or the teaser. I love the fact that even though they're simalar to the Girls, they each of an aspect of personallity that the Girls don't.
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Re: JASPER THE FRIENDLY GHOST

Post by erzyhazel on Tue Jan 19, 2010 1:24 am

sound like casper to me


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Post by HauntedMansionHolly on Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:46 am

LOL! Love it blue xD
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